In the wall lived a small mouse. The mouse saw a cat eating some food. The cat was near the bench the cat was licking her lips. It sounded like a scary sound.
“I think I will go and hide behind the chair,” thought the mouse. The mouse tiptoed quietly to the chair. The cat saw the mouse. The mouse ran back quickly to the hole in the wall. In the hole in the wall was very dusty and dirty. The mouse came through the wall out to the other side. There was a person who had a mouse trap!
Hi Sophie,
Great job using our technique of the week (beginning with a “Where Things Are” sentence) in your writing. I liked how you used some descriptions in your story to make it come to life. Keep on writing!